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The Immortal Guardian vs. Determined Demon
(Foreword - Chapter 1)
Foreword:
Yo! Its Saiix here once again! Welcome to the third story written about me! I hope you enjoy this battle that I have against a girl named Chara, one of the 7 humans who fell into the Underground, a place inside the earth, where hundreds of monsters live. There are quite a few versions of Chara, but the one in this story is somewhat royalty, so you know it would be fun. Anyway, read on if you wanna, I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did fighting!


Chapter 1: A Peaceful Snowdin Night...?

In an age long past, in a time that mankind had forgotten, humans and monsters used to live on the surface together. The monsters were able to use magic, and the humans feared the monsters would use their magic to take control of the world. The monsters may have had magic,  but the humans had greater numbers, and so, the humans locked the monsters underground, with a powerful barrier to prevent the monsters from returning to the surface.

A peaceful night blanketed the underground town of Snowdin, all of the residents were asleep. A large group of monsters, monsters that did not reside in Snowdin, silently moved through the town, searching for something, or someONE. Discovering that they would not find what they were looking for in the heart of town, the monsters decided to begin searching closer to the outskirts.

On the outskirts of Snowdin, near the doors that led to the Ruins, there was a nice home concealed by the trees. In the window, a warm glow came from within. A light was on, and smoke slowly wafted from the chimney. Someone was clearly awake inside. Inside the house, Saiix sat at the window, watching snow fall. Saiix was far from "Normal". He had the ability to use magic, for one, and no matter what happened to him, he would not die. The humans had feared his immortal mother, but let her stay on the surface, as they knew her time was almost at an end when they saw that she was carrying a child. Saiix was born human, and lived almost normally until he turned 18, when his mother passed everything she had onto him. Her immortality, her powers, everything. After she passed everything onto him, she took her final breath, dying in her only child's arms.

He sighed, and got up to put water on to boil for tea. He was putting the water in the kettle as a loud crash broke the silence of Snowdin's peaceful night. The monsters broke his door open, and surrounded him, grabbing hold of him, and even though he struggled, refused to let go. A monster moved behind him, and hit him in the back of the head, temporarily knocking him out.
(I have hit a wall, and could use some help with where the story should go.)
Saiix stood with his back to the unconscious green haired woman he called his mother, known only as C.C, holding nothing but a jet-black katana and a shining white katana. He was wounded, blood dripped from his cuts, but he didn't care, all that mattered right now was protecting his mother. His long black coat, tattered and well-worn, now being temporarily used to cover her burned clothes. "I /WILL/ protect you, Mother, I swear on my life, that to get to you, they'll have to go through me first." He said as he readied his blades against his mother's attackers. A deep laugh echoed inside his mind as the attackers had him FAR outnumbered, 16 to 1.

Foreword:

Hey, so, before you read this, I should tell ya about who I am, yeah? Fine. My name is Saiix, Saiix Hiei Uchiha. I am the son of Sasuke Uchiha and C.C. This story you're about to read is about me and my mother, okay? And before you say anything like: "But that's impossible, Sasuke only has a daughter, and that was with Sakura!" I know, my father is Sasuke, my mother is C.C, got it? Good. So just go ahead and read... If you wanna, that is.


Chapter 1: Curiosity Killed The Cat

Babies are born with an incomplete soul, and when they are born, their incomplete soul is completed by small pieces of the parents' souls. Now this story begins with a young man with short black hair named Saiix, his soul still incomplete at age 16, a hole in his chest where his heart should be. He spent quite some time wandering around within his rifts, looking at the different worlds and the people inside them.

His rifts were more like gateways to corridors that connected worlds and dimensions than a tear in the fabric of the universe. Rifts behave differently based on the person using them, for people who cannot open them, it is simply a portal, from one world to another. The rifts are usually open, although hidden, in every world. The rifts can be locked by someone who has the ability to open and manipulate rifts, who in this case was Saiix. One day while he was wandering around inside of his rifts, watching some people in one of the worlds, a young looking woman with light green hair came across one of the rifts, and curious about it, stepped in, being instantly teleported to the Village Hidden in Leaves, Konohagakure.

Confused, the woman looked around, as she had traveled through time and space to a different world. Saiix sighed as nothing was happening in most of the worlds, and decided to go back home, knowing that he would be alone again today. He dropped out of a rift, and after getting his bearings, he proceeded to make his way home, not knowing that the green haired woman found his home, and was looking around inside, searching for someone to ask for help.

While he opened the door, he took off his coat, and hung it up, moving towards the bathroom to take a look at himself. Meanwhile, the woman had gone to the kitchen, where Saiix had left soup to cook over the course of the day, smelling the scent, and tried a little bit, smiling as it tasted very delicious, not being too powerful with one flavor, but instead the flavors blended together in perfect harmony. After washing up his face, he traced the X-shaped scar on his forehead, a little bit of pain from contact, but it was meant to kill him, remembering the slash of the swords on his first mission, and how he would be dead if his father didn't save him. Feeling some of the pains from the scar, he took some painkillers, and let his mind wander until he heard the timer meaning the soup was done.

The young man went to the kitchen, his blue and green eyes focused on the floor as he walked in, and bumped into the woman, both of them stumbling back. He tried to catch himself, he hit one of the knives, and fell over, the knife falling and slightly cutting open his scar. He felt it, and put a hand to his forehead, as a little bit of blood dripped down to his chin.


Chapter 2: The Woman Named C.C.

The woman gasped as she saw him, holding his hands over his bleeding scar, and the hole where his heart should be, she rushed over to him, her golden-yellow eyes trained on his face, as if she were memorizing his face. "Who are you? Why are you here?" Saiix asked as the bleeding slowed, then stopped. The green haired woman blinked a few times, and slowly spoke. "M-My name is C.C... I don't know, one moment I was walking home, and I saw this thing, and I went inside, the next, I am in this strange place... So I tried to find someone who might be able to help me. What's your name?"

"My name is Saiix, Saiix Hiei Uchiha. You say you stepped through something, and you ended up here in Konoha? Hmm... Maybe we should wait until my father gets back to do anything…" Saiix sat up and shook his head, his other eye becoming golden yellow like hers, but as it was hidden under his hair, neither of them noticed. She nodded and moved to the wall, sitting down on the floor. Saiix stood up, and poured out 2 bowls of soup, giving one to C.C., and sitting down beside her, weirdly calm and relaxed while he sat next to this stranger, although there was something about her, that made him feel very good and warm, as if he had been good friends with her for a long time.

Later on, Saiix and C.C. had talked to Sasuke, who had no explanation for why she appeared, but immediately had fallen in love with her, and asked her to marry him. Much to Saiix's surprise, she said yes, and so she became Saiix's mother, and as a result of that, they began getting closer and closer, and bit by bit, the hole in his chest began to close. Saiix had decided that he would call C.C. "Mother", as she was the only one he knew who would take care of him as her own child. As he began to open up to her, his soul began taking on small pieces of hers, making them into pieces of his own soul.


Chapter 3: An Immortal Mother

One day a few months later, while Saiix and C.C. were out on their way to get groceries, they were attacked by a pair of rogue shinobi who had infiltrated the village, and stabbed C.C. in the heart. Seeing this horrifying event happen, Saiix screamed, losing control as his power increasing to monstrous levels as well as the hole in his chest completely closing, the mark on C.C.'s forehead, the symbol of the Geass, had been formed on his chest, and his soul used its new power, the Geass, to twist the souls of the rogues who attacked them. Forcing one to stab his partner in the back, then to slit his own throat. After the power made them kill themselves, his power returned to normal, and he knelt down next to C.C., who he thought was dead, and started to cry, believing C.C. to have been dead, even though the hole in her chest closed as he cried.

C.C. opened her eyes, and looked up at him, seeing how upset he was in thinking she was dead. "Saiix, Saiix! I'm okay! I am alive!" She cried out as she sat up, and hugged him, his tears slowing to a stop. As he hugged back, his appearance changed, his hair growing very long and becoming light green like hers. His once green eye slowly changing to a golden yellow color. His soul and body adapting to the pieces of C.C's soul that he had taken in on its own.

"I-I thought that you were... y-you were..." Saiix stuttered as he slowly let go of her. "Dead? Not even close..." She replied with a smile and a slight laugh, her eyes widening as she saw the hole in his chest completely closed, the Geass symbol over his heart. "Saiix... Your chest, it's healed! And your hair, its just like mine!" He looked down at himself, and looked at his hair with a smile. "Looks like my soul is completed..." He stood up, and held his hand out to help her up. Having this horrific experience done and over with, they continued on to go back home.


Chapter 4: The Training to Control Saiix's Power Begins!

As Saiix and C.C. lived together, his soul began to take after more and more like hers. She taught him about the Geass, a power that varied based on who used it. His Geass was very similar to a man named Lelouch's, a man who Saiix saw when he was looking through the rifts at the past. C.C. was his assistant, as well as the one who gave Lelouch his Geass.

Years later, Saiix had taken C.C. out on one of his journeys to one of the other worlds. He knew very little about this world, and his journeys out to them were for the purpose of learning about them. This world at first glance seemed to be full of people. But upon closer inspection, the "people" were actually just shadows, faint presences in this mirror of another world.

C.C. saw this as an opportune moment to talk to Saiix about the Geass. He possessed it, but it was very clear that he had no control over it, in terms of calling on it when it was needed. As it was now, it only activated during times of extreme emotion. When C.C. asked if Saiix wanted to learn how to control his Geass, he nodded without hesitation. And so, they set up a small home in one of the empty houses nearby, and C.C. became a teacher as well as his mother.

Chapter 5: The Geass Training Concludes

Saiix and C.C. trained for almost a whole year, before she had a bizarre dream, a dream where someone who appeared like Saiix, but had a darker, more sinister presence than him, motioned from her, to Saiix, its dark eyes focused on her face, as a dark Geass symbol formed in front of it, and it became darkness, being absorbed into Saiix.

The next morning, C.C. decided to bring up what she saw in her dream with Saiix. "Saiix... I saw something last night, something that felt... Evil, this thing looked like you..." Confused, Saiix looked towards his mother, an eyebrow raised. "It appeared to possess the Geass, but I haven't given it to anyone other than you. What could this mean?" Saiix looked to the ground, in deep thought.

"There was a figure who looked like me, and seemed to possess the Geass... If its what I think this is, then my soul could not handle all of the power of the Geass that you gave me, so it must have split that power into two, and that power must have used my emotions to create another personality, a Darker version of me."

Over the next few weeks, Saiix and C.C. trained, C.C. was afraid of the darkness that the power formed within her child, and hoped that he would be strong enough to control the powers, both his own, and the dark powers that existed deep within him. As the days went by, Saiix showed no signs of losing control of his body to the dark powers, putting C.C.'s fears to rest. Saiix had shown that he could handle the Geass, and that he could call upon it. After a few more days of training, the two returned home.

Chapter 6: The Dark King Who Dwells Within

A few weeks before Saiix's 18th birthday, C.C. was attacked once again.

Saiix stood with his back to his unconscious mother, she was badly wounded, and her body was slowly healing. He was holding only a jet-black katana and a shining white katana. He was wounded, blood dripped from his cuts, but he didn't care, all that mattered right now was protecting his mother. His long black coat, tattered and well-worn, now being temporarily used to cover her burned clothes. "I /WILL/ protect you, Mother, I swear on my life, that to get to you, they'll have to go through me first." He said as he readied his blades against his mother's attackers. A deep laugh echoed inside his mind as the attackers had him FAR outnumbered, 16 to 1.

The dark figure appeared in Saiix's mind, a slightly shimmering white expanse extending in all directions as far as the eye could see. The only thing that was not like the rest of the area was the space around the dark figure, the dark Saiix that appeared in C.C's dream weeks prior. With a smirk on its face, it gave another deep laugh as it began to speak. "You seem to be getting tired, child... You cannot win against these opponents... Give in to my power, and you will be able to save your precious mother."

"If I were to use your power... Then I'd be able to save Mother?" Saiix looked down, thinking about his mother, and how injured she was. Knowing that he couldn't win against the ones who attacked her, he sighed, as the dark figure moved towards him, a shadowy black hand outstretched. "To save mother... Okay. Give me the power to save her." He hesitantly took the dark figure's hand.

The dark figure grinned, as Saiix took his hand. The figure disappeared, being absorbed into him, and took over. Saiix's wounds closed, a black geass symbol formed behind him, and he began to exert a dark, evil aura, as the attackers charged at him. With ease, he dodged the attackers' blades, and countered using his own katanas. Within seconds, the attackers were taken down, and the possessed Saiix let out the same loud, deep laugh that he heard in his mind before. "I am King!!! All shall bow before me!" The possessed Saiix laughed again, causing C.C to awaken.

C.C looked to Saiix, and seeing the bodies lying near him, she gasped. She knew what Saiix's limits were, and the ones who attacked her, and the sheer number of them, would have been past Saiix's limits. He turned to her, a grin on his face, and she tried to get up, using Saiix's coat to cover her own burned clothes. Saiix's consciousness began to surface, and he forced out from the Darkness' control. The aura disappeared, and he fell to his knees, on the verge of crying. "I'm sorry, Mother... It was the only way that I could protect you..."
The Immortal Guardian vs. Determined Demon
(Foreword - Chapter 1)
Foreword:
Yo! Its Saiix here once again! Welcome to the third story written about me! I hope you enjoy this battle that I have against a girl named Chara, one of the 7 humans who fell into the Underground, a place inside the earth, where hundreds of monsters live. There are quite a few versions of Chara, but the one in this story is somewhat royalty, so you know it would be fun. Anyway, read on if you wanna, I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did fighting!


Chapter 1: A Peaceful Snowdin Night...?

In an age long past, in a time that mankind had forgotten, humans and monsters used to live on the surface together. The monsters were able to use magic, and the humans feared the monsters would use their magic to take control of the world. The monsters may have had magic,  but the humans had greater numbers, and so, the humans locked the monsters underground, with a powerful barrier to prevent the monsters from returning to the surface.

A peaceful night blanketed the underground town of Snowdin, all of the residents were asleep. A large group of monsters, monsters that did not reside in Snowdin, silently moved through the town, searching for something, or someONE. Discovering that they would not find what they were looking for in the heart of town, the monsters decided to begin searching closer to the outskirts.

On the outskirts of Snowdin, near the doors that led to the Ruins, there was a nice home concealed by the trees. In the window, a warm glow came from within. A light was on, and smoke slowly wafted from the chimney. Someone was clearly awake inside. Inside the house, Saiix sat at the window, watching snow fall. Saiix was far from "Normal". He had the ability to use magic, for one, and no matter what happened to him, he would not die. The humans had feared his immortal mother, but let her stay on the surface, as they knew her time was almost at an end when they saw that she was carrying a child. Saiix was born human, and lived almost normally until he turned 18, when his mother passed everything she had onto him. Her immortality, her powers, everything. After she passed everything onto him, she took her final breath, dying in her only child's arms.

He sighed, and got up to put water on to boil for tea. He was putting the water in the kettle as a loud crash broke the silence of Snowdin's peaceful night. The monsters broke his door open, and surrounded him, grabbing hold of him, and even though he struggled, refused to let go. A monster moved behind him, and hit him in the back of the head, temporarily knocking him out.

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